Friday, November 19, 2021

Free writing

 


 

One day when me and my family went to auckland so we could visit my dad’s family! Once we got to Auckland we waited for my aunt to pick us up.When she picked us up she asked where we wanted to go my mum said “Oh just to papas and nanas house thank you! Aunty drove us to papas and nanas house.when we got there we saw that papa was very sick! Very sick.Me and my family were very worried! We all took him to the doctors but the problem got even worse! Nana called the doctors so we can see what is wrong with papa.they told us that papa had a condition.but they didn't tell us what it was! The whole family was worried and crying.we never knew that papa had this! We really miss even on this day!The doctors said that papa was gonna die! Nana and my dad were crying hard out! We all left and said goodbye to papa even though we knew he couldn’t hear us because he was already in Heaven. ;( we all got ready for the next day and went to the graveyard so we could bury him.. We all got some flowers and dropped them down.All of the family couldn’t stop crying because we miss papa so much.


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(This was real)


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